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Didn't see this until now. Great ending! So sweet :) Also I love the fight scene - the way you make it more than just swinging and blocking and parrying. I might end up using this to help in my own fight scenes!

One thing I was wondering... at one point Rilth lunges at Aryss, and then it says "but she was already gone." It makes sense after a few sentences, but in the moment it's a little confusing. Maybe if there was some way to make that a little more clear...? :)

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